Monday, November 2, 2009

ENGLISH
1.I think my result is good enough because I get nearly Band 1.
2.Because I get Band 2.
3.Because I study hard.
4.Read some books so that learn more new words.
MATHS
1.I think I've done a good job as I get Band 1.
2.Because I get Band 1.
3.Because I study hard.
4.Go tution to learn more about maths.
MOTHER TOUNGUE
1.I think I done a great a great job because I am the first in the class.
2.Because I get the hiest mark in my class.
3.Because my tution teacher teach me very well.
4.Read more chinese book and learn more new words.
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9 comments:

  1. Kimberly Irawan :)November 15, 2009 at 9:46 PM

    Good Job Jimin !

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  2. Mr.RangerNovember 15, 2009 at 9:51 PM

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  3. daniel tanNovember 15, 2009 at 9:52 PM

    for your sentences, your sentence two is not nesscecary. it is already said in scentence one.

    and instead of hiest, it should be highest.

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  4. Mr.RangerNovember 15, 2009 at 9:52 PM

    I think you need to eleberate

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  5. presley tohNovember 15, 2009 at 9:54 PM

    great job !

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  6. Brendan TanNovember 15, 2009 at 9:55 PM

    You did quite well! Actually I thought you will not do well but you did quite well! I hope you can improve but I did not mean improve in bullying!

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  7. sim marcusNovember 15, 2009 at 9:56 PM

    Ji Min,I think when you grow up you will be a smart man.

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  8. AnonymousNovember 15, 2009 at 10:00 PM

    First, at the word "I can" after "so that" in "Read some books so that learn more new words."
    2nd, don't repet the word again in "I think I done a great a great job because I am the first in the class."
    3rd, well done for all your subjects and keep it up!

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  9. lee zheng yangNovember 15, 2009 at 10:01 PM

    GOOD !

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